第四部分写作(共两节,满分 40 分)
第一节应用文写作(满分 15 分)
41. 假定你是校英文报编辑李华,学校将举办校园读书分享会,请你写一则通知,内容包括:
1.活动时间、地点;
2.活动内容(读书分享、交流讨论、优秀作品展示);
3.欢迎全体同学参加。
注意:
1.词数 80 左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.通知格式规范,开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】范文
Notice
To enrich our after-school life and arouse students’ interest in reading, our school will hold a campus reading sharing activity.
The activity will be held in the school lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday. During the activity, participants can share their favorite books and reading insights. We will also organize group discussions to exchange different ideas. Besides, excellent reading journals and essays will be displayed on the wall.
Reading lights up our life. All students are welcome to take part in it.
School English Newspaper Office
【解析】
【导语】文章要求考生以校英文报编辑身份写一则读书分享会通知,包含时间地点、活动内容及欢迎语。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激发:arouse→ stimulate
举办:hold→ host
见解:insight→ perspective
组织:organize→ arrange
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Participants can share their favorite books and reading insights.
拓展句:Participants can share their favorite books as well as their reading insights so that they can exchange ideas with each other.
【点睛】【高分句型1】To enrich our after-school life and arouse students’ interest in reading, our school will hold a campus reading sharing activity. (运用了不定式作状语)
【高分句型2】The activity will be held in the school lecture hall from 2 p.m. to 4 p.m. next Friday. (运用了一般将来时的被动语态)
第二节读后续写(满分 25 分)
42. 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
注意:
1.续写词数应为 150 左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Last Saturday afternoon, I walked home alone after school. On the way, I noticed an old man standing by the roadside, looking worried. He held a small basket of fresh vegetables in his hand. It was obvious that he wanted to sell his vegetables but no one stopped.
The weather was cold and the wind was blowing strongly. The old man’s hands were red with cold. I felt sorry for him. I remembered my mom always bought fresh vegetables for family dinner. So I walked up to him and asked about his vegetables.
Paragraph 1:
I decided to buy all his vegetables.
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Paragraph 2:
The old man thanked me repeatedly with a big smile.
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【答案】例文
Paragraph 1: I decided to buy all his vegetables. Seeing the old man’s trembling red hands and the fresh greens covered with thin dust, I made up my mind without hesitation. I took out all my pocket money and paid him the full price, telling him there was no need to give me change. The old man stared at me in surprise, asking again and again if I really needed so many vegetables. I smiled and explained that my family loved fresh seasonal vegetables, and it would be a pity if his produce remained unsold in the cold wind. The bitter wind still blew hard, yet the worried look on his face faded away, replaced by soft relief.
Paragraph 2: The old man thanked me repeatedly with a big smile. His wrinkled face lit up with warm joy, and his eyes were filled with sincere gratitude. He bent down to pick out the freshest vegetables and carefully packed them into my schoolbag. He told me he had waited for nearly two hours and almost gave up selling them. Watching him carry his empty basket and walk away slowly, a warm feeling flooded my heart. This tiny act of kindness taught me that warmth hides in ordinary life. Even a small favor can drive away others’ loneliness and bring endless brightness to the world.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述作者放学路上看见寒风中卖菜无果、焦急无助的老人,心生怜悯买下老人全部蔬菜,帮助老人摆脱困境,同时感悟小小善意也能传递温暖的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容可知,第一段可描写作者买下全部蔬菜,婉拒找零,打消老人疑惑,缓解老人内心的焦虑。
②由第二段首句内容可知,第二段可描写老人满心感激,细心装好蔬菜,作者目送老人离开,领悟微小善意的力量。
2.续写线索:买下蔬菜——婉拒找零——安抚老人——老人致谢——细心装菜——感悟善意
3.词汇激活
行为类
①更换:replace/take the place of
②放光:light up /brighten up
情绪类
①惊讶:surprise/astonishment
②感激:gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】[高分句型1] Seeing the old man’s trembling red hands and the fresh greens covered with thin dust, I made up my mind without hesitation.(运用了现在分词短语作状语以及省略that的宾语从句)
[高分句型2] The bitter wind still blew hard, yet the worried look on his face faded away, replaced by soft relief.(运用了过去分词短语作状语)