46. 假定你是高三学生李华，你的英国朋友Jim打算来中国旅游，他对中国的科技发展很感兴趣，发邮件请你推荐一座能深度体验中国科技发展的城市。请给他回一封邮件，内容包括：
（1）推荐的城市；
（2）推荐的理由；
（3）表达祝愿。
注意：
（1）写作词数应为80个左右；
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re planning a trip to China this summer! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Jim,
I’m thrilled to hear you’re planning a trip to China this summer! Based on your interest in cutting-edge technology, I highly suggest Shenzhen as your top destination.
Shenzhen is China’s “Silicon Valley” and a global center for innovation. First, it’s home to tech giants like Huawei, Tencent, and DJI, where you can visit exhibition halls to witness different futuristic inventions, from AI robots to 5G applications. Second, don’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let you experience VR space exploration or program a mini robot! Besides, Shenzhen perfectly combines technology with daily life. You’ll even see drones delivering packages and cashless payments everywhere! Wish you an inspiring journey!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向英国朋友Jim推荐一座能深度体验中国科技发展的城市，并解释推荐理由及表达美好祝愿。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
先进的：cutting-edge→advanced
推荐：suggest→ recommend
不同的：different →various
鼓舞人心的：inspiring → encouraging
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句：Shenzhen is China’s “Silicon Valley” and a global center for innovation.
拓展句：Shenzhen is not only China’s “Silicon Valley” but also a global center for innovation.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Based on your interest in cutting-edge technology, I highly suggest Shenzhen as your top destination. (运用了过去分词短语作状语)
【高分句型2】Second, don’t miss the Shenzhen Science Museum, where interactive exhibits let you experience VR space exploration or program a mini robot! (运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句)
第二节（满分25分）
47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。
I have a black Jaguar. I’ve been driving it to and from work for three years. It looks still brand-new because I always clean and polish it until it shines brightly. But its right door is marked by an ugly, noticeable dent (凹陷) which I’ve never bothered to fix. Whenever asked why, I will shake my head. Only I know it’s a reminder of an unforgettable afternoon.
It was a typical summer. After work, I was driving down a neighborhood street in my Jaguar, going a bit too fast. I was half-listening to the radio, half-watching for kids rushing out from between parked cars, and I slowed down when I thought I saw something move. But as my car passed, no kids appeared. Instead, a brick crashed into the side of my door with a sickening thud (闷响) .
I braked hard and reversed to the spot where the brick had been thrown and then quickly jumped out of the car. There appeared a clear dent on my right door! My blood almost boiled. Seeing a boy, no older than 10, with another brick in his hand, I frowned fiercely, eyes flashing with anger, and stormed to him, “What was that all about?” my voice was tight and sharp. “My car is damaged. Look at this dent…”
“Please mister... Please, I’m sorry... I didn’t know what else to do,” his eyes were filled with terror, a blood stain on his elbow, and he begged. “I’m sorry... No one would stop. My sister fell out of her wheelchair — I can’t lift her up!” He pointed to a parked car, his voice breaking. Besides it, there was his sister, lying on the ground, bleeding from fresh scrapes (擦伤) and cuts. Her wheelchair was tipped over nearby. “Would you please help me get her back into her wheelchair? She’s hurt and she’s too heavy for me,” said the boy. Hearing this, I felt upset and the anger that had burned in my chest a moment ago vanished completely, replaced by a rush of shock and overwhelming guilt.
注意：
1. 续写词数应为150个左右；
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
I rushed over to the girl, knowing exactly what to do.
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Leaving the hospital, I looked at the dent on my car.
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【答案】Possible version
I rushed over to the girl, knowing exactly what to do. I knelt down carefully, my hands gentle as I avoided the girl’s bleeding scrape. “They look serious and we need to go to the hospital!” I glanced at the boy standing beside me. He nodded repeatedly, tears blurring his eyes but relief softening his tense shoulders. Instead of lifting the girl back into the wheelchair, I got her into the back seat of my Jaguar, totally ignoring the dent. “Don’t worry; we’ll get help soon,” I said, my voice warm and steady, trying to make up for my earlier harshness. After putting the wheelchair into my trunk, we hurried to the hospital, where the girl got timely and effective treatment. “Thank you so much for helping me,” the girl said softly, her voice trembling with gratitude.
Leaving the hospital, I looked at the dent on my car. It was still there like a scar. The sun shone on the polished body of the Jaguar, making the ugly mark even more noticeable, but I felt no annoyance, only a calm gratitude. I reached out and traced the edge of the dent with my fingertips, my mind replaying the boy’s plea and the girl’s soft weep. Possible version 1 This dent, which I once wanted to fix immediately, is now my most precious reminder: to slow down, to set aside my own haste, and to never ignore someone in need. I will never fix it, for it is not a flaw — it is a lesson that I carry with me every time I drive.
Possible version 2
The dent on my Jaguar still there, a permanent mark. But it no longer felt like damage. It felt like a reminder — a reminder that sometimes, the “brick” that hits you isn’t an attack. It’s a cry for help, a chance to slow down, to see the world beyond your own speed, and to be the person who stops. To this day, that dent is still on my car. And I’ll never fix it.
Possible version 3
It reminds me every day to slow down, to set aside my own haste, and to never ignore someone in need. I don’t fix it because it’s not a flaw; it’s a gift, a constant reminder of the day a small boy’s courage taught me what truly matters in life.
【解析】
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，文章讲述作者一次下班开车时，车门被男孩扔砖砸出凹痕，作者暴怒质问，却得知男孩是因妹妹从轮椅摔落无人帮忙，才扔砖拦车求助。得知缘由的作者满心愧疚，这凹痕也成了难忘的提醒。
【详解】1. 段落续写：
①由第一段首句内容“我立刻冲到女孩身边，心里清楚该怎么做。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：作者立刻救助女孩，将她抱上车送医，不顾车的凹痕，温和安抚孩子，女孩最终得到及时救治并向作者致谢。
②由第二段首句内容“离开医院时，我看着车上的凹痕。”可以预测续写这段主要内容：离开医院，作者看着车上的凹痕内心满是感恩，这道凹痕成了珍贵警醒，作者会永远保留它铭记教训。
2.续写线索：救助女孩——立即送医——得到及时救治——女孩致谢——作者的感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①扫视：glance at/cast a glance at
②忽略：ignore/neglect
③帮助：help/assist/aid
情绪类
①温柔地：softly/gently/tenderly
②感激：gratitude/thankfulness
【点睛】[高分句型1] He nodded repeatedly, tears blurring his eyes but relief softening his tense shoulders. （运用了独立主格结构）
[高分句型2] After putting the wheelchair into my trunk, we hurried to the hospital, where the girl got timely and effective treatment. （运用了where引导的非限制性定语从句）
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